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JDWolfe:
((Its not Chex Quest, its an original piece I'm working on.. I hope you dont mind my putting this up, I just want to get opinions and criticism :)))

File is attached. Enjoy.

Batmanifestdestiny:
Nice work! ;D

I'm a sucker for Scifi stuff.

Though, I did notice a couple of grammatical errors, but that's what Editors are for, right? ;)

JDWolfe:
Heh, I'm more worried about the story elements themselves. Grammar and spelling can be easily fixed, but criticism is the best way to perfect the plot and what not :D

Kuwabara:
I liked it! I didn't see any writing errors that I could find. I'm more curious as to what happens next.

Good job. :)

ChexMaster2109:
I didn't get a chance to read it, but I could tell it was good just from a glance.

Keep working on it  :D

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